#1 MinFicton: The Woman in the Street by Pamela D. Beverly

I’m taking Nortina’s one minute fiction challenge at https://lovelycurses.com//2017/06/12/Mondays-one-minute-fiction-week-of-June12/.

Here’s my contribution:

I got to her before he did.

“Don’t touch her!” his commanding voice rang out.

I stopped short for a second but bent down to give aid.

2 response to "#1 MinFicton: The Woman in the Street by Pamela D. Beverly"

  1. By: Nortina S. Posted: June 13, 2017

    Oooh, such an intense moment! Makes me wonder who is the woman in the street, and why the two men are rushing to her aid…

  2. By: relationspdbeverly Posted: June 13, 2017

    Well, the “I” character was a woman and I wish I’d had enough time to complete the scene. Yours was more thorough.

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